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to make life difficult. If a child has good parents, he ,sI<AFI
is fed, looked after and loved, what he may do, It is __1__ +fS<YT
improbable that he will ever again in his life be given \Kr8k`f
so much without having to do anything in turn. In addition, __2__ G%iTL"6
life is always presenting new things to the child—things E@,m+
that have lost their interesting for older people because __3__ }C4wED.
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in the rain, or in the snow.His first visit to the 7zM9K+3L
seaside is a marvelous adventure. But a child has his pains: )G#mC0?PV
He is not so free to do as he wishes as he thinks old ;NU-\<Q{
people do; he is continually being told not to do things, __4__ (Zg'])
or being punished for that he has done wrong. __5__ v{d$DZUs
His life is therefore not longer perfectly happy. __6__ @`$'sU
When the young man starts to earn his own living, he k/P.[5
becomes free from the discipline of school and parents; =PU($
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clothes, and his room, but has to work if he wants to live jr,N+K(@T
comfortable. If he spends most of his time playing about in __7__ X NgcBSD
the way that he used to as a child, he will suffer hungry. __8__ )fHr]#v
And if he breaks the laws of society as he used to break {{jV!8wK
the laws of his parents, he may go to prison. If, therefore, __9__ 85YUqVi9
he works hard, keeps out of trouble and has good health, \yl|*h3
he can have the great happiness of seeing himself making __10__ {j=`
steady progress in his job and of building up for himself q`,%L1c4
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1.what改为whatever。whatever引导让步状语从句,相当于no matter what,意思是“无论什么”,“不管什么”,whatever在从句中作宾语。 LRVcf
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2.turn改为return。短语in turn表示“轮流地; 挨个, 依次; 反过来”,而在这里是指孩子对父母的回报。 ,Cb3R|L8
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4.第一个do改为 are。与前面的is相对应。 r/2=
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5.that改为what。that引导的是定语从句,在本句中应该使用关系代词what,相当于the thing/ things that。 #L~i|(=U5
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6.not改为no。固定搭配的副词短语“no longer” _p^"l2%D/
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7.comfortable改为comfortably。修饰动词live应为副词而不是形容词。 -}#HaL#'K
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8.suffer改为go或become或be。或把hungry改为hunger。 8.i4QaU
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9.therefore改为however。此处的条件状语从句表示转折。 8NWo)y49H
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10.making 改为 make。