开头万能公式:
osHCg =!b6FjsiG 1. 开头万能公式一:名人名言
-db75= 有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编!
1X1 NtS@ 原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧?
$_;e>*+x 经典句型:
n,'OiVl[ A proberb says, “ You are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言)
'0RwO[A#1 It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.
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GW^,g@%C As everyone knows, No one can deny that…
~B i_7 Q 2. 开头万能公式二:数字统计
0&+k.Vg 原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。
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oqd;6[%G According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college
Kv&g5&N, students wanted to further their study after their graduation.
dihjpI_ 看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造:
1{x.xi"A/ Honesty
`r"+644 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。
:ue:QSt(u Travel by Bike
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=t 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。
Jzji&A~ Youth
K7knK 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。
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7w:ef0S 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
8H,4kY?Z 更多句型:
t.8 GT&p A recent statistics shows that …
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结尾万能公式:
EC2+`HJ" 6fH@wQ"wN 1. 结尾万能公式一:如此结论
#4MBoN(3 说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:
5Wyz=+?m| Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good
sQ6}\ manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
4a0:2 kIKa 如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了!
'j^xbikr 更多过渡短语:
www.zlbbs.net e0@6Pd to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus
h~&gIub 更多句型:
>_rha~ Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
V@>r*7\F 2. 结尾万能公式二:如此建议
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:i)~wXn 如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话,那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了,因为这里虽然也是废话,但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽!
/V3=KY`_J Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve
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Z3>N<u8) 这里的虚拟语气用得很经典,因为考官本来经常考这个句型,而如果我们自己写出来,你说考官会怎么想呢?
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a+hd(JX0~ Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.
rl9.]~ Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be
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>zDF2Y[ 写作的“七项基本原则”:一、 长 短 句原则
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V8N 工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:
3 ?Y| As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is
Pnd`=%w%] to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to
\~LQ%OM satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite
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*3T|M@Y 如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!
YeF1C/'hy 强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。二、
3!5Ur& 主 题 句原则
*^([ ~[ 国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!
WM)-J^)BJ 特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的!
97K[(KE To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully
Rq[ M29 prepared before the exam(主题句). Without sufficient preparation,
y^]tahbo you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、
YC_1Ks 一 二 三原则
9b?SHzAa 领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点…
O5H9Y}i] 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。
*6 _tQ9G 1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)
\6;=$f/?t 2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗)
A>{p2?`+! 3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗)
9<Kj6t_ 4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place,
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YDGS}~m~Q 5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)
Agrp(i"\@ 6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)
^Q&u0;OJ 7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)
+nQw?'9Z 8)most important of all, moreover, finally
^( Rvk 9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)
^[15&T5 10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)
jNeI2-9c} 建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!四、 短语优先原则
wCk~CkC? 写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如:
JJRK7\~$ I cannot bear it.
C;(t/zh 可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.
fu$R7 I want it.
vd6l7"0/ 可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it.
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这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。五、 多实少虚原则
KR"M/# 原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous,
<_(/X,kBK humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital
z#F.xVg' 之类的形象词。再比如:
2Hum!p:1 走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room
fh^lO ^ 但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room
w{k)XY40sW *****走出房间应该说:sail out of the room
={?vAb: 小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room
yz2Ci0Dwy 老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room
X0*QV- RN 所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩!六、 多变句式原则
hp"L8w 1)加法(串联)
>%E([:$A 都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and,
5d@t7[] 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说:
7=]i~7uy I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.
m*X[ Jtr 如果是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式:
_tr<}PnZ Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.
L !4t[hhe= 其它的短语可以用:
/=uMk]h besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
)6~1 ^tD 2)转折(拐弯抹角)
v+"rZ 批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。
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mW%?>Z1=>d The coat was thin, but it was warm.
l<(Y_PE: 更多的短语:
yk2 !8 despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of,
Da$r ` despite, notwithstanding
>ds%].$-\ 3)因果(so, so, so)
clI*7j.4E# 昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友…可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!
p#f+P? The snow began to fall, so we went home.
aj,)P3DJu 更多短语:
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then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a
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"x'), 4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)
zm9TvoC%} 有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。
3>z[PPw 举例:This is what I can do.
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Q Z8QQ`*S 同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分:
Y^"4?96 When to go, Why he goes away…
FDFH,J`_ 5)附加(多此一举)
.V6-(d 如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。
2=PBxDs; The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.
@D`zKYwX1 I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.
s_jBu Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.
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其实很简单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但是whom
Oi:JiD= or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。
;i#LIHJ 6)排比(排山倒海句)
p}]q d4j 文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!
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o%(bQV-T Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such
5{>0eFzG as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean
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vW.%[] We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge,
RJJ1 to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (气势恢宏)
ui.'^F< 要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!七、 挑战极限原则
oo'w-\2]p 既然十挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀!
zi!#\s^ 原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如:
Rlg#z4m The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb
^E@@YV the Western Hills.
.K9l*-e[= Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about
nTZ> |R) three times that of China.
?R?Grw)`H 如果您可一些出这样的句子,不得高分才怪!
J~J@ ]5/ 文章主体段落三大杀手锏:一、举实例
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I3K? @%B4;c 思维短路,举实例!提出一个观点,举实例!提出一个方案,举实例!而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式,任何情况下,只要我们无法继续文章,不管三七二十一,尽管举例子!
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rbh[j@s@ sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance.
t-lv|%+8 For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will
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t&f" jPu> 更多句型:
{5 Kz' FT To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…,
=, TS MV for example二、做比较
PSEWL6=]N 方法:写完一个要点,比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点,再比较与之相反的;
#ko6L3Pi 世界上没有同样的指纹,没有相同的树叶,文章亦同,只有通过比较,你才会发现二者的相同点(through
=AzOnXW:S comparison)和不同点(through contrast)。下面是一些短语:
D2?S,9+E_ 相似的比较:
t[j9R#02? in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner
f\=6I3z 相反的比较:
.)0gz!Z on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead,
?Hk.|5A} nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …,
/gX%ABmS …三、换言之
&&*wmnWCS{ 没话说了,可以换一句话再说,让你的文章在多一些字,或者文邹邹地说,是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。
ex:3ua$N 实际就是重复重复再重复!下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you!
YZ{;%&rB I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you.
v<`$bvv? I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love
XC2Q*Z with you.
MKe *f% 或者上面我们举过的例子:
?Cc$] I cannot bear it.
. *Z#cq0 可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.
eNivlJ,K|@ 因此可以这样说:I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with
fA;x{0CAMX it or I am fed up with it.
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