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一、长短句原则 !rmo*-=^=
工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题: NTX+7<
As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar. R#^pNJN
如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记! Nm :lC%>X
强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。 Gg
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二、主题句原则 $,v+i
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国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事! <y/AEY1
特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的! I8wVvs;k
To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主题句). Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly. ?U[nYp}"v
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三、一二三原则 iK0J{'
领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点… 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。 >N"PLSY1
1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗) .Eyk?"^
2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗) %SFR.U0}yK
3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗) `D4'`Or-U
4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推荐,原因:俗) *G"#.YvE
5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐) nk.Eq[08
6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐) }n8;A;axi
7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐) $ aBSr1
8)most important of all, moreover, finally JT_B@TO\
9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况) nezbmpL4
10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况) A>@epCD
建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚! <T[ui
四、短语优先原则 X,CFY
写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如:
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I cannot bear it. [m&ZAq
可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it. ?2>v5p
I want it. ZO$T/GE6%
可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it. n:] 1^wX#
这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。 C^O^Jj5X%
五、多实少虚原则 HKw4}FC*
原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。 Mc^7FWkw
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走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room M
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但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room l_EI7mJ
*****走出房间应该说:sail out of the room 1yc@q8
小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room !qv;F?2
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所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩! oPZ4}>uV
六、多变句式原则 ?!-im*~w
1)加法(串联) 5(Oc"0''H
都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说: JFdzA
I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar. L<`g}iw
如果是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式: ^q2zqC
Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm. Lcm!e
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besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover Ba~Iy2\x
2)转折(拐弯抹角) s50ln&2
批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。 OSk9Eb4ld
The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition. < Ifnf6~
The coat was thin, but it was warm. 49GCj`As
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despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding rg.if"o
3)因果(so, so, so) HbVLL`06*
昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友…可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系! Pq%cuT%
The snow began to fall, so we went home. Q8i6kf!
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then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that 3s2M$3r)6
4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重) Hc9pWr"N
有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。 UtN>6$u
举例:This is what I can do. g!ww;_
Whether he can go with us or not is not sure. bk]|C!7$
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When to go, Why he goes away… vKf=t&gqr
5)附加(多此一举) s=4.Ovd\
如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。 {J$aA6t:"T
The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine. C+5nft6:
I don’t enjoy that book you are reading. >^&+,*tsS4
Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going. ZI7<E
其实很简单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但是whom or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。 @Rm/g#!h"
6)排比(排山倒海句) iY-dM(_:]
文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势! o*_ D
Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you. ^dqE
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Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides. S J5kA`
We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (气势恢宏) Sls>
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要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可! +Sfv.6~v
七、挑战极限原则 ?F/3]lsggT
既然十挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀! Bh?;\D'YC
原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如: o9i\[Ul
The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills. YbKW;L&Ff
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China. PBmt.yF
如果您可一些出这样的句子,不得高分才怪! rAKdf??
文章主体段落三大杀手锏: |wDCIHzQ
一、举实例 9!LAAE`
思维短路,举实例!提出一个观点,举实例!提出一个方案,举实例!而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式,任何情况下,只要我们无法继续文章,不管三七二十一,尽管举例子! w8qI7/
In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance. yWzTHW`)Mr
For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her. gA6C(##0
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二、做比较 ?@_dx=su
方法:写完一个要点,比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点,再比较与之相反的; Gkl#s7'
世界上没有同样的指纹,没有相同的树叶,文章亦同,只有通过比较,你才会发现二者的相同点(through comparison)和不同点(through contrast)。下面是一些短语: -LyIu#
相似的比较: h>wU';5#f
in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner *XJSa
相反的比较: :O7J9K|
on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, … d1-QkW^0y
三、换言之 Z]tz<YSkG
没话说了,可以换一句话再说,让你的文章在多一些字,或者文邹邹地说,是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。 { T.VB~C
实际就是重复重复再重复!下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you! @9-qqU@
I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you. >2a~hW|,
I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love with you. _#+i;$cO-X
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I cannot bear it. <t8})
可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it. -a3C3!!
因此可以这样说:I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it. Vh&uSi1V
更多短语: W/ERqVZR]
in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simply