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life is always presenting new things to the child—things @>`N%wH'
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in the rain, or in the snow.His first visit to the HELTL$j,b
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comfortable. If he spends most of his time playing about in __7__ i .?l\
the way that he used to as a child, he will suffer hungry. __8__ .v) A|{:2
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the laws of his parents, he may go to prison. If, therefore, __9__ }g.)%Bw !
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1.what改为whatever。whatever引导让步状语从句，相当于no matter what，意思是“无论什么”，“不管什么”，whatever在从句中作宾语。 2)`4(38
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2.turn改为return。短语in turn表示“轮流地; 挨个, 依次; 反过来”，而在这里是指孩子对父母的回报。 DTV"~>@
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3.interesting改为interest。在形容词性物主代词their的后面应跟名词性成分。 7OZjLD{ID
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4.第一个do改为 are。与前面的is相对应。 _E[)_yH'-
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5.that改为what。that引导的是定语从句，在本句中应该使用关系代词what，相当于the thing/ things that。 l :VcV
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6.not改为no。固定搭配的副词短语“no longer” "f`{4p0v
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7.comfortable改为comfortably。修饰动词live应为副词而不是形容词。 &
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8.suffer改为go或become或be。或把hungry改为hunger。 1lQO`CmR6M
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9.therefore改为however。此处的条件状语从句表示转折。 ;l=Z W
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10.making 改为 make。
