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is fed, looked after and loved, what he may do, It is __1__ y K YP
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so much without having to do anything in turn. In addition, __2__ 5rf H;`
life is always presenting new things to the child—things ia^%Wg7
that have lost their interesting for older people because __3__ ,5\2C{
they are too well-known. A child finds pleasure in playing
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in the rain, or in the snow.His first visit to the aVQSN
seaside is a marvelous adventure. But a child has his pains: +dCDM1{_a
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people do; he is continually being told not to do things, __4__ B.22
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or being punished for that he has done wrong. __5__ /UpD$,T|^|
His life is therefore not longer perfectly happy. __6__ <Qce x3
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becomes free from the discipline of school and parents; O }K_l1
but at the same time he is forced to accept responsibilities. *2,e=tY>
He can not longer expect others to pay for his food, his .:{h{@a
clothes, and his room, but has to work if he wants to live AXl!cgi
comfortable. If he spends most of his time playing about in __7__ M&qh]v g C
the way that he used to as a child, he will suffer hungry. __8__ ~!]&>n;=G
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the laws of his parents, he may go to prison. If, therefore, __9__ qIbg
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he works hard, keeps out of trouble and has good health, \7Gg2;TA6o
he can have the great happiness of seeing himself making __10__ -?< Ww{
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1.what改为whatever。whatever引导让步状语从句，相当于no matter what，意思是“无论什么”，“不管什么”，whatever在从句中作宾语。 f._l105.
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2.turn改为return。短语in turn表示“轮流地; 挨个, 依次; 反过来”，而在这里是指孩子对父母的回报。 7 I_1 #O
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3.interesting改为interest。在形容词性物主代词their的后面应跟名词性成分。 [YC=d1F5
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4.第一个do改为 are。与前面的is相对应。 H>60D|v[
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5.that改为what。that引导的是定语从句，在本句中应该使用关系代词what，相当于the thing/ things that。 &|v{#,ymeb
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6.not改为no。固定搭配的副词短语“no longer” FH)t: !#
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7.comfortable改为comfortably。修饰动词live应为副词而不是形容词。 7#QLtU
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8.suffer改为go或become或be。或把hungry改为hunger。 bf& }8I$
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9.therefore改为however。此处的条件状语从句表示转折。 "r
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10.making 改为 make。
