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F 1. 开头万能公式一:名人名言
10}oaL S 有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编!
u>&\@?( 原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧?
@M#2T 经典句型:
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:1_hQeq 2. 开头万能公式二:数字统计
zIF &ZYP 原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。
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原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的,可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一,但编无妨,只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型:
<kLY1EILM According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college
Z ;% students wanted to further their study after their graduation.
Pdf_{8r 看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造:
pal))e!B Honesty
WcH^bAY 6 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。
$k'f)E Travel by Bike
EyBdL 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。
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dZ%b|CUb 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。
te6[^_k Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?
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80 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
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gH6D 1. 结尾万能公式一:如此结论
UD9h5PgT 说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:
N.64aL|1 Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good
>hQR manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
>p<(CVX[ 如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了!
F)gL=6h 更多过渡短语:
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to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus
`Mjm/9+18 更多句型:
ux=a9 Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
8vT:icl 2. 结尾万能公式二:如此建议
'R'>`?Nh 如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话,那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了,因为这里虽然也是废话,但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽!
VqbiZOZ@ Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve
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{^\-%3$ 这里的虚拟语气用得很经典,因为考官本来经常考这个句型,而如果我们自己写出来,你说考官会怎么想呢?
>|iy= Zn%' 更多句型:
iF%q6R Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.
C$tSsw?A Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be
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sW]n~kTt' 写作的“七项基本原则”:一、 长 短 句原则
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2Z97Tq 如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!
:rj78_e9 强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。二、
z=fag'fzM 主 题 句原则
7&QVw(:)M 国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!
ryT8*}o 特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的!
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D!P?sq _5r prepared before the exam(主题句). Without sufficient preparation,
7*5ctc!dG you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、
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L,ra=SV F 领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点…
N\fT6#5B 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。
|")x1'M 1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)
b1#=q0Zl 2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗)
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@Dy.HQ~ 4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place,
wY95|QS lastly(不推荐,原因:俗)
nT12[@:Tr 5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)
br;G5^j3? 6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)
/Ow?nWSt 7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)
gctaarB& 8)most important of all, moreover, finally
!BX62j\? 9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)
jQb D2x6( 10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)
Z C93C7lJ 建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!四、 短语优先原则
d.AjH9 jg 写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如:
r83~o/T@ I cannot bear it.
5\S7Va;W 可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.
/RM-+D:Y I want it.
DS C4 可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it.
:/NN=3e 这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。五、 多实少虚原则
[Mz;:/ 原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous,
P1wRt5 humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital
!d\GD8|4 之类的形象词。再比如:
Elp!,(+&6 走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room
Y+GeT#VHe 但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room
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e_], O_Z 小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room
%B*dj9n^q 老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room
>n~p1: $ 所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩!六、 多变句式原则
BUinzW z{a 1)加法(串联)
<&:&qngg 都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and,
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^4pKsO3ul Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.
9D{).f0 其它的短语可以用:
"5:f{GfO#v besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
K<6x4ha 2)转折(拐弯抹角)
Lc<xgN+cJ 批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。
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v8bl-9DQ The coat was thin, but it was warm.
&hN&nH"PC 更多的短语:
Lzx$"R- despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of,
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:DhHqvK 3)因果(so, so, so)
VhFRh,J(T 昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友…可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!
k(z<Bm The snow began to fall, so we went home.
IXvz&4VD 更多短语:
&17,]# 3 then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a
WG/J4H`Od result, for this reason, so that
$;uWj| 4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)
2~WFLD 有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。
cJ##K/es 举例:This is what I can do.
iW1ih QX Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.
yC0f/O 同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分:
6~h1iY_~ When to go, Why he goes away…
`3y!XET 5)附加(多此一举)
gSr}p$N 如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。
@=NVOJy}c The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.
E[3FdX8 I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.
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X!rQ@F3 其实很简单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但是whom
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_A,-[*OKI 6)排比(排山倒海句)
HM@}!6/s 文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!
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iijd$Tv to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (气势恢宏)
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要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!七、 挑战极限原则
N8kb-2 既然十挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀!
sm2p$3v 原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如:
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;WvYzd9 Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about
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K=m9H=IX~T 如果您可一些出这样的句子,不得高分才怪!
6VH90KAT 文章主体段落三大杀手锏:一、举实例
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V@#*``M,3 sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance.
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z*M}=`M$ ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the
I~p8#<4#b seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her.
x{NNx:T1 更多句型:
sR"zRn To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…,
=2RhPD for example二、做比较
).0V%}> 方法:写完一个要点,比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点,再比较与之相反的;
/S7+B] 世界上没有同样的指纹,没有相同的树叶,文章亦同,只有通过比较,你才会发现二者的相同点(through
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/h?<MI\7V 相似的比较:
<a8#0ojm in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner
M1AZ}bc0] 相反的比较:
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c;c:Ea5 …三、换言之
<@u0.-] 没话说了,可以换一句话再说,让你的文章在多一些字,或者文邹邹地说,是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。
k~0#'I9 实际就是重复重复再重复!下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you!
98ca[.ui I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you.
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R#Y50hzT with you.
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N=>- Q) 可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.
r#LnDseW 因此可以这样说:I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with
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