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2017-03-24 21:50 |
考博英语作文开头闪光句内容
光有个漂亮的开头还远远不够哦，文章的中间部分也就是猪肚环节同样要写得充实潇洒，不然配在一个光鲜的开头下面，不但不能相得益彰反而显得干瘪无力，让老师的印象分也骤然下降。那接下来我们就看看如何将这“大头”部分写得出彩。 !>@V#I
要在内容部分得高分，用到的技巧大约有这几种：长短句交叉、使用插入语、用词多样准确生动又形象、关键词灵活换用不重复、句型使用多样表述地道 wXZY5-h4
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内容技巧一：华丽丽的长短句 0S7I sk2W
写长短句的宗旨，一张一弛，文武之道，一长一短，长句在前短句后，通篇长句累死读者，通篇短句不够刺激，长句华丽短句简洁，穿插着用方为王道 8=o(nFJw
这类句子是跟着你行文内容走的，没有什么固定公式可以套，其精髓在于多用从句，顺带着插入一些短语进一步修饰。但一些优秀的长句你可以刻意去学，去模仿，然后灵活运用到自己的文章中去,至于短句部分言简意赅地跟在长句后即可。下面就拿某W的Comment中的漂亮长句为例 m.a1
1. These delicate sentences said by Audrey Hepburn, who is widely recognized as one of the most beautiful women, aim at one topic: it is one’s inner beauty that really counts.（非限制性定从，放在句子中间修饰中心词sentences, 显然要比直接+aim at好得多） ~S>ba']
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2. Backham, who has been a legend in his time, will definitely be an immortal, even though he might no longer be striving on the sparkling pitch.（一个非限制性定从+ 一个让步状语从句） ;k%s KVP
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3. However, flows of advertisements will not only impact the producer’s image, but also make the potential customers bored and even spoil the advertising program.（not only …… but also也是写长句时的主力
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4. Wherever they go or whatever they do, they always bear in mind that they are messengers of peace, representing China.（bear……in mind, 一个宾从&现在分词作状语） #=#$b _6*
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5. Almost at the same time the news came that people in drought-stricken south-western China are facing horrible shortage of drinking water, people in the rest part of China joined hands to donate water and other resources, hoping to give a hand to those in trouble and be no onlooker.决不袖手旁观（有1个时间状语从句+1个同位语从句+1个名词&动词过去式构成的复合形容词+1个现在分词作目的状语，be no+名词表决不，动词搭配又合理，可谓长句中的典范） >qvD3 9w
第6句为某E同学Comment中的一句长句，大家把它和第5句对照着看，对照着学 uWj-tzu
6．Even though Zhao has been handsomely compensated 650,000 yuan by government, which is expected to be more, this financial compensation still can not hold a candle to无法与……相提并论 Zhao’s 11 years’ torturous and freedom-lost prison life, thus confirming the saying that, “Money is not everything” .（让步状从+非限制性定从+复合形容词+现在分词作结果状语+引用谚语） (3r,PS@Qq@
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7. Sunshangxiang stood out as a dazzling pearl from quantities of distinct historical figures, confirming the saying that, ‘Women are no inferior to men’. （现在分词作结果状语与引用名言的完美结合，推荐） 3 v$4LY
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内容技巧二：神出鬼没的插入语 h5keYBA
为嘛要用插入语？短句中用插入语，可以充更多字数，中长句中间用插入语，让句式更整齐美观 ^!Jm/-
来看一些典型的插入语 :8wF
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单词作插入语，如：besides, however, otherwise, therefore, though "a{f?
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1.On the other hand, however, computer is not without its defects/disadvantages. ClZyQ=UAD
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2. We should, therefore, take advantage of the fruits of computers and avoid the opposite facet方面. 6l7a9IJ
（therefore作插入语，使用的频率也非常之高，同时，上句中用fruits代替了advantages, 避免了前后重复并且相当之形象） ADz|Y~V!
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短语作插入语，如for example, by the way, in other words, so far, as a matter of fact, as a result等等 MA6%g} o
1. China and India, for example, are neighbours. #7ZB bq3 =
2. The United Nations are calling for more environment-friendly actions, in other words, they are demanding that people all over the world （should）switch to green products and do their bit to protect the earth. ;rL$z;}8
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