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开头万能公式: |3cR'|<Ual DpR%s",Q 1. 开头万能公式一:名人名言 Ywr{/ 有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编! >) ^!gz8 原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧? 8vP)qy8 经典句型: D.GSl A proberb says, “ You are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言) A|+{x4s` It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. Y#5S;?bR (适用于自编名言) +$'/!vN 更多经典句型: _B[(/wY As everyone knows, No one can deny that… uQNoIy J) 2. 开头万能公式二:数字统计 W2k~N X#@ 原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。 J.d `tiN 原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的,可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一,但编无妨,只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型: ?m.4f&X According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college {Q"<q`c students wanted to further their study after their graduation. StVv"YY 看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造: BkF[nL*| Honesty ~eP2PG 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。 A!~o?ej Travel by Bike @wPmx*SF 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。 73.b9mF Youth tQ67XAb 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。 #@fypCc Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work? >seB["C 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。 m @%|Q; 更多句型: bW]+Og A recent statistics shows that … /~[R
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*9QO 结尾万能公式: YovY0nO URgF8?n 1. 结尾万能公式一:如此结论 C(t/:?(y 说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子: Xn=fLb( Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good c"ztrKQQ manners arise from politeness and respect for others. \YS?}! 0 如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了! rWXW}Yg 更多过渡短语:www.zlbbs.net O)R0,OPb to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus @El<"\ 更多句型: ?s]`G'=>V` Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that… [
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sPuLn9G the problem. }nl)*l 这里的虚拟语气用得很经典,因为考官本来经常考这个句型,而如果我们自己写出来,你说考官会怎么想呢? CdO-xL6F 更多句型: l0{DnQA>I Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken. ?xZmm%JF Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be FF/R_xnx taken. df& |Lc1J 写作的“七项基本原则”:一、 长 短 句原则 ;G]'}$`/q =
1\wZuK# 工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题: ud D[hPJd As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is UAZ&*{MM^ to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to 4
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TP::y 强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。二、 h+D=/:B 主 题 句原则 .`N`M9 国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事! ZF(=^.gc 特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的! W2h[NimU To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully z&,sm5Lb prepared before the exam(主题句). Without sufficient preparation, \r,.hUp you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、 #9VY[< 一 二 三原则 4 GW[
GT 领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点… %W;Gf9.w 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。 5O
;^Mk| 1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗) *%'7~58ObS 2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗) {NgY8wQB 3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗) gEHfsR=D6 4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, d ovwB`5 lastly(不推荐,原因:俗)
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0 10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况) 1";e'?^x 建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!四、 短语优先原则 -G#@BtB2+ 写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如: (A fbS=[ I cannot bear it. wf<`J/7u 可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it. }.V0SM6 I want it. ,xe@G)a 可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it. ur,"K'w 这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。五、 多实少虚原则 #s
R0* 原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous, {^5<{j3e humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital \If!5N 之类的形象词。再比如: jI2gi1,a 走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room *
r4/|.l 但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room P9mxY*K)%5 *****走出房间应该说:sail out of the room gXLZ) >+A+ 小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room m<,G:?RM 老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room r,@X>_} 所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩!六、 多变句式原则 1L=Qg4 H 1)加法(串联) v\9,j 都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and, 2T(,
H.O 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说: m/c&/6nk I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar. /xm#:+Sc 如果是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式: kPX2e h Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm. } .H Fm'p 其它的短语可以用: 3auJ^B} besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover &G@-yQ 2)转折(拐弯抹角)
kl3S~gE4@ 批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。 0B$7S,2 The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition. <,4R2' The coat was thin, but it was warm. ['4\O43yv 更多的短语: ogc('HqF^' despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, a[74%L? despite, notwithstanding 1S[5#ewB;j 3)因果(so, so, so) t3#H@0< 昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友…可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系! tC@zM.v% The snow began to fall, so we went home. Q(;B) 更多短语: _[{:!?-? then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a '=Kof1 result, for this reason, so that gR-Qj 4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重) 'Elj"Iiu 有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。 _+Jf
.n20 举例:This is what I can do. BheEI;} Whether he can go with us or not is not sure. 4`UL1)A] 同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分: O{B
e )E~ When to go, Why he goes away… u$%D9Z ^ 5)附加(多此一举) s*)41\V0 如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。 )p!*c, The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine. yK&*,J
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55n Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going. n(Q\',C 其实很简单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但是whom uFm+Y]h or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。 KYkS6|A 6)排比(排山倒海句) ~gfA](N 文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势! 2-$bh Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated \=w'
HZH#+ or simple, there is plenty in London for you. Tbi]oB# Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such `
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e'~-`Z9-) 要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!七、 挑战极限原则 ,W1a<dl 既然十挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀! ^zaKO'KcV 原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如:
b(}Gm@# The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb XDpfpJ,z"} the Western Hills. 2/v35| ? Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about $Wr\[P: three times that of China. `%t$s,TiP 如果您可一些出这样的句子,不得高分才怪! >Lw}KO` 文章主体段落三大杀手锏:一、举实例 VX^o"9Ntl jFuC=6aF 思维短路,举实例!提出一个观点,举实例!提出一个方案,举实例!而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式,任何情况下,只要我们无法继续文章,不管三七二十一,尽管举例子! J+)'-OFt0 In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted k]SAJ~bS| every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as a>wfhmr sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance. .
]o3A8 For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will U,Z"G1^ ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the u\{qH!?t seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her. .e`,{G(5q7 更多句型: w`c0a&7 To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…, w=f0*$ue+w for example二、做比较 @gt)P4yE 方法:写完一个要点,比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点,再比较与之相反的; cS<TmS! 世界上没有同样的指纹,没有相同的树叶,文章亦同,只有通过比较,你才会发现二者的相同点(through .UM<a
Ik comparison)和不同点(through contrast)。下面是一些短语: D9 qX->p 相似的比较: _Kc1 in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner 2
.[_t/T 相反的比较: \*f;!{P{ on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, Vh"MKJ'R^ nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, kWB, ;7 …三、换言之 cCM
j\H@ 没话说了,可以换一句话再说,让你的文章在多一些字,或者文邹邹地说,是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。 / Zo~1q 实际就是重复重复再重复!下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you! +"]oc{W! I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you. `kv1@aQPL I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love m)s
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IE it or I am fed up with it. +0VG[c\8 更多短语: $bk>kbl P in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more E@:Q 'g% simply
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