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医学考博英语破题技巧－－－写作部分
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英语作文的总体评分原则（内容与语言两个方面） f(*iagE y
记分标准如下： E.^F:$2
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13-15（20－17）分：内容切题，包括题中所列三方面的内容：清楚表达其内涵，文字连贯；句式有变化，句子结构和用词正确。文章长度符合要求。 n@//d.T
10-12（16－13）分：内容切题，包括题中所列三方面的内容；比较清楚地表达其内涵；文字基本连贯；句式有一定变化，句子结构和用词无重大错误。文章长度符合要求。 c #8@>;
7-9（12－9）分：内容切题，基本包括题中所列三方面的内容：基本清楚地表达其内涵；句子结构和用词有少量错误。文章长度符合要求。 jFwJ1W;?-
4-6（8－5）分：内容基本功题，基本包含题中所列三方面的内容；语句可以理解，但有较多的句子结构和词错误。文章长度基本符合要求。 Gs( ;&fw
1-3（ 4－1）分：基本按要求写作，但只有少数句子可理解。 (*V
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0分：文不切题，语句混乱、无法理解。 FLaj|Z~#)
因此，一篇好的作文应基本达到： .-.b:gdO(
1） 有较好的写作基础，文章流畅，遣词造句不当，文章结构完整，内容符合要求； kFQx7m
2） 语法基本正确； W%
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3） 句法基本准确，句子与句子段落之间过渡连贯； ffem7eQ
4） 有一定词汇量，字数符合要求； *4[P$k$7
5） 说理清楚，内容充实。 lLNI5C
6） 就小作文而言，还要做到格式与语域正确。 Poxo
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7） 书写干净整洁。如果书写较差，以致影响交际，分数会降低一个档次。 C$`^(?iO/
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用汉语思维，逐字翻译。 7O' u5 N
用词搭配不当。 /Ca
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词汇量小，拼写困难。 /=:F w}vt
句子逻辑关系混乱。 ^AR kjYt
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不会应用关联词转承上下句子和段落。 *!`bC@E
People learn English to use it , Some learn it to study or work abroad . Others learn it to read books and magazines in English or have something to do with English-speaking foreigners.采用适当关联词，改进为:people learn English for practical purposes :some learn it to study or work abroad, while others learn it to read or communicate in English. Ba9"IXKH
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i. 分不清及物与不及物动词，例如：rise和raise; hear和listen等 D x.hM[
ii. 被动与主动语态的误用，例如：interesting和interested; speaking和spoken 等； 1A N)%
iii. 词类混淆，将动词或形容词误作名词用，将名词和动词误作形容词用等；例如：benefit和beneficial; difficult和difficulty; pleasure和pleased等。 dX DuO
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v. 冠词、情态动词、介词、代词等方面的错误，例如：a English book, should did, must done等。 N`7+] T
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