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英语写作绝招:各部分万能套用公式
开头万能公式: R)ejIKtY .#Z}}W# 1. 开头万能公式一:名人名言 &QLCij5: 有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编! j[9xF<I 原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧? zN*/G6>A 经典句型: A'p"FYlCW A proberb says, “ You are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言) &A]*"lt|w It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. U*1rA/"n (适用于自编名言) 'GS1"rkW<5 更多经典句型: v~uQ_ae$> As everyone knows, No one can deny that… 3]M
YHb 2. 开头万能公式二:数字统计 ~1i,R1_\Y 原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。 v`bX#\It 原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的,可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一,但编无妨,只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型: ':kBHCR7 According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college |s[m;Qm[ku students wanted to further their study after their graduation. i%D/@$\D6 看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造: A<QYW,:| Honesty i=]IUjx< 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。 @| qnD Travel by Bike 5d
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R[ 说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子: vx5;}[Bhm Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good Qf$0^$ " manners arise from politeness and respect for others. JU1U=Lu." 如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了! |bVNlL"xN 更多过渡短语: (TDLT^ to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus jCtl
] 更多句型: q;}^Jpb; Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that… eN,s#/ip] 2. 结尾万能公式二:如此建议 N`Zm[Sv7 如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话,那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了,因为这里虽然也是废话,但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽! = K"F!} Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve gOx4qxy/m| the problem. Cc1sZWvz 这里的虚拟语气用得很经典,因为考官本来经常考这个句型,而如果我们自己写出来,你说考官会怎么想呢? e-]k{_wm 更多句型: L>).o%(R Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken. VX[{X8PkS Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be yaa+j8s] taken. \V7Hi\) 写作的“七项基本原则”:一、长 短 句原则 !,V8?3.aJn q@8Rlc& 工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题: Z@RAdwjR`p As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is svU107? to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to Y~,[9:SR satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite VCX})sp similar. WvAl!^{` 如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记! BYhPOg[ 强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。二、 4_F<jx,G 主 题 句原则 U:J~Oy_Z 国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事! ZBJ.dK?Ky| 特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的! )d>"K`3 To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully sq@Eu>Ng(X prepared before the exam(主题句). Without sufficient preparation, +4GuA0N6 you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、 ceH7Rq:4W 一 二 三原则 lh(A=hn"n 领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点… kFw3'OZ, 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。 l!~8 1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗) x*
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Qk Gr{ 写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如: AY[7yPP I cannot bear it. .NQoq
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(nvSB}? 如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。 J~n{gT<L The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine. /F/`?=1<$ I don’t enjoy that book you are reading. oBAD4qK Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going. i~ zL,/O8 其实很简单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但是whom s{$c 8 or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。 5hg>2?e9s? 6)排比(排山倒海句) ffuV$# 文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势! ?z
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:JZ to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (气势恢宏) !7^fji 要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!七、挑战极限原则 C.pNDpx- 既然十挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀! jf .ikxm 原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如: 8l;0)`PU The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb pwU]r the Western Hills. hMi!H.EX. Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about kpK:@ three times that of China. AVyo)=& 如果您可一些出这样的句子,不得高分才怪! }Ct_i'Ow 文章主体段落三大杀手锏:一、举实例 4?72TBl] *!lq1h 思维短路,举实例!提出一个观点,举实例!提出一个方案,举实例!而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式,任何情况下,只要我们无法继续文章,不管三七二十一,尽管举例子! a]
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