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英语写作万能作文
开头万能公式: 6sPk:5 VCjq3/[_ 1. 开头万能公式一:名人名言 7_DG 5n
T 有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编! dFQo 原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧? *z q .C 经典句型: f`9JE8 A proberb says, “ You are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言) A t{U~^ It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. lW
p~t (适用于自编名言) gmY/STN 更多经典句型: ^]6M["d/p As everyone knows, No one can deny that… SBTPTb 2. 开头万能公式二:数字统计 MM#i t=u 原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。 )GVBE%!WEd 原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的,可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一,但编无妨,只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型: q +R*Hi According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college U/Wrh($ #4 students wanted to further their study after their graduation. f])M04< 看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造: thuRNYv< Honesty Kq&qE>Ju 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。 (YwalfG {C Travel by Bike w?*z^y@ 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。 O|
I+], Youth |O-`5_z$r 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。 5;mRGY Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work? */w7?QOv 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。 H\E7o"m 更多句型: abi[jxCG A recent statistics shows that … y<uAp T|;@T^ 结尾万能公式: nO{ x^b < "_< 9PM1t 1. 结尾万能公式一:如此结论 S8" f]5s 说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子: K]/Od Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good I{ ryD -! manners arise from politeness and respect for others. FI"HJwAs 如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了! mnjs(x<m 更多过渡短语: uSN"
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更多句型: gCuAF$o Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that… w^q7n 2. 结尾万能公式二:如此建议 VUtXxvH 如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话,那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了,因为这里虽然也是废话,但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽! =']3(6* Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve \X|sU:g the problem. |3shc,7 这里的虚拟语气用得很经典,因为考官本来经常考这个句型,而如果我们自己写出来,你说考官会怎么想呢? +G*JrwJ&= 更多句型: (R*j|HAw`X Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken. "Sridh? Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be 6C [E taken. &n
j&:?w 写作的“七项基本原则”:一、 长 短 句原则 7
oQ[FdRn* a.2L*>p 工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题: ik.A1j9oN As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is ["3\eFg to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to Jr;jRe`4c satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite -WJ?:?' similar. ^oM|<";!?D 如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记! l Dxc`S 强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。二、 ?D`T7KSe~D 主 题 句原则 Yg9joNBh 国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事! lIRlMLuG 特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的! ;30nd= To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully c; 2#,m^ prepared before the exam(主题句). Without sufficient preparation, 2c5-)Dt)T you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、 TZR)C P5 一 二 三原则 *Hz^K0:8( 领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点… N$>^g"6o 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。 V[o`\|< 1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗) @#g<IBG=* 2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗) )3Z ^h<"j 3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗) {X(:jAy 4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, u&mS8i} lastly(不推荐,原因:俗) !K
f#@0E.. 5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐) F8:vDv 6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐) , EGQ@:3/ 7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐) {!t7[Ctb 8)most important of all, moreover, finally ZOCDA2e(j 9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况) SN7"7jo P< 10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况) 2'EUy@0 建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!四、 短语优先原则 ?=m?jNa;nC 写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如: Bp8'pj;~ I cannot bear it. 7(5xL T$ 可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it. s<qe,'Y I want it. &e6CJ 可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it. e/0<[s*#Q 这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。五、 多实少虚原则 %?e& WLS 原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous, t2,A@2DU2 humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital Ag{iq(X 之类的形象词。再比如: +qh[N@F 走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room q#<^ ^4U 但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room QUu}Xg: *****走出房间应该说:sail out of the room At-U2a#J{ 小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room fQ#l3@in 老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room H&:jcgV*P 所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩!六、 多变句式原则 >-H{Z{VDd 1)加法(串联) anXc| 都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and, N[s}qmPha 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说: b )B?
F I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar. 1oc3$A 如果是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式: 6@rMtQfI Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm. j'A_'g'^ 其它的短语可以用: O8h%3& besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover .Y&)4+ckL 2)转折(拐弯抹角) "
wNJ 批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。 ,6-:VIHQ The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition. ,yiX# ;j The coat was thin, but it was warm. tfj:@Z5&$C 更多的短语: LDPUD' despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, wB.&}p9p despite, notwithstanding RZXjgddL 3)因果(so, so, so) e )d`pQ6 昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友…可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系! E7rDa1 The snow began to fall, so we went home. ynthDEo 更多短语: ,J+}rPe"sf then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a N sXHO result, for this reason, so that :tV*7S=) 4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重) ~E17L]ete 有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。 _852H$H\ 举例:This is what I can do. T;r2.Pupn Whether he can go with us or not is not sure. HiZ*+T.B 同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分: d
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When to go, Why he goes away… ,o86}6Ag 5)附加(多此一举) ofm#'7P 0 如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。 i@*{27t The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine. >qnko9 V I don’t enjoy that book you are reading. zdB^S%cztS Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going. OP[@k 其实很简单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但是whom ]d$8f
or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。 h4fJvOk|! 6)排比(排山倒海句) 75T%g!c# 文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势! NcBIg:
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We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, 8W*%aOi5+ to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (气势恢宏) Acez'@z 要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!七、 挑战极限原则 ]E5o1eeg 既然十挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀! }|h# \$w 原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如: 5TH~.^`Fi The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb rD*jp6Cl the Western Hills. KI"#f$2& Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about ~[t[y~Hup three times that of China. z O-z%y 如果您可一些出这样的句子,不得高分才怪! zVViLUwG 文章主体段落三大杀手锏:一、举实例 }7b%HTF= R$R *'l 思维短路,举实例!提出一个观点,举实例!提出一个方案,举实例!而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式,任何情况下,只要我们无法继续文章,不管三七二十一,尽管举例子! j*|VctM In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted ik)|{%!K]H every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as /:cd\
A} sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance. Yj&F;_~ For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will
6fkRrD ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the >xN
.F/[K seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her. )*u8/U 更多句型: /p/]t,-j2 To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…, t*p71U4+I for example二、做比较 l [dK[4 方法:写完一个要点,比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点,再比较与之相反的; D(~U6SR 世界上没有同样的指纹,没有相同的树叶,文章亦同,只有通过比较,你才会发现二者的相同点(through f[]dfLS"W comparison)和不同点(through contrast)。下面是一些短语: dB{Q"! 相似的比较: [F+}V, in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner 0j^Kgx 相反的比较: l5~os> on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, kXViWOXU^ nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, T~-ycVc …三、换言之 P?%s
#I: 没话说了,可以换一句话再说,让你的文章在多一些字,或者文邹邹地说,是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。 Mc) }\{J 实际就是重复重复再重复!下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you! _?nL+\'V I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you. (|2t#
'm I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love B.=FSow with you. 9p]QM)M 或者上面我们举过的例子: Usvl}{L[ I cannot bear it. BT !^~S%w 可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it. VG5i{1
0 因此可以这样说:I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with 'B|JAi? it or I am fed up with it. @@f"%2ZR[ 更多短语: cTifC1Pf in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more *;W+>W simply
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