Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Immoral Behavior in Public. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below: +}m`$B}mJ
1.我们经常在公共场合见到各种不道德的行为，叙述你的一次相关经历。 DTC
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2.这些不文明行为会有哪些影响。 , IhQ %)l
3.我们应该怎样改善这种现象。 QyA^9@iVs
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这是一篇议论文，可以根据作文要求列出提纲：第一部分，列举不文明行为并叙述一次相关经历;第二部分，不文明行为的影响，一两个即可;第三部分，提出建议。 K_+M?ap_
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To witness 1immoral behavior in public, one need only visit the Beijing subway. I still remember the first time I took the Beijing subway. It was an early morning. I was in a hurry to go to school. When I was trying to get a ticket, I found a lot of people waiting in front of me, but nobody was in the line. tfHr'Qy BC
1Immoral behaviors in public 2initiate a series of problems. One of the most serious ones is that it may exert a negative impact on our 3sense of social responsibility. We will keep ignoring other people’s rights and feelings, and in turn, we too will be disrespected some day. M+")*Opq
The reform of1 this phenomenon is certainly not easy. With an eye on practical 2implementation and 3cost effectiveness , I propose that society make it clear in every way that people who fail to respect the ④common good will be seriously punished. Stricter policies for this should be made to correct this phenomenon as soon as possible. +ase>'<N#
We all expect “A World without Thieves". Everyone 1shares the huge responsibility of 2demonstrating his or her justice at the proper time. Personal responsibility is vital to build a harmonious socialist society. <!t;[ie?y
◇第一段思路点评： 5 xr2
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◇第二段思路点评： BT(eU*m-
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2 initiate：意思是“产生，发动” 0xi2
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3sense of social responsibility：意思是“社会责任感” "uZ^zV`"
◇第三段思路点评： k_1;YO BF
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1 this phenomenon：指代前文“immoral behavior in public”，与上文衔接，且避免重复 'ym Mu}q
2implementation：意为“执行，实施” l^ tRy_T:-
3cost effectiveness：意为“成本效率” L
④ common good：意为“公益” GS>YfJ&DZ
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1share a huge responsibility: 意为“承担重大责任” wg
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