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is fed, looked after and loved, what he may do, It is __1__ E\V>3rse
improbable that he will ever again in his life be given @~63%6r#4M
so much without having to do anything in turn. In addition, __2__ <mm}IdH
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in the rain, or in the snow.His first visit to the '6 /uc:zv
seaside is a marvelous adventure. But a child has his pains: t?0=;.D
He is not so free to do as he wishes as he thinks old fA3
people do; he is continually being told not to do things, __4__ } KMdfA
or being punished for that he has done wrong. __5__ kW,yZ.?f
His life is therefore not longer perfectly happy. __6__ lA]u8+gXd
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but at the same time he is forced to accept responsibilities. hCo&SRC/5
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clothes, and his room, but has to work if he wants to live DI&xTe9k
comfortable. If he spends most of his time playing about in __7__ {UUVN/$
the way that he used to as a child, he will suffer hungry. __8__ !t_,x=
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1.what改为whatever。whatever引导让步状语从句,相当于no matter what,意思是“无论什么”,“不管什么”,whatever在从句中作宾语。 T4#knSIlh
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2.turn改为return。短语in turn表示“轮流地; 挨个, 依次; 反过来”,而在这里是指孩子对父母的回报。 Sx ~_p3_5U
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3.interesting改为interest。在形容词性物主代词their的后面应跟名词性成分。 hKT:@l*
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4.第一个do改为 are。与前面的is相对应。 Ab"uN
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5.that改为what。that引导的是定语从句,在本句中应该使用关系代词what,相当于the thing/ things that。 ,mX|TI<*
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6.not改为no。固定搭配的副词短语“no longer” q%'ovX(dm
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7.comfortable改为comfortably。修饰动词live应为副词而不是形容词。 ~p
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8.suffer改为go或become或be。或把hungry改为hunger。 '?>eW2d
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9.therefore改为however。此处的条件状语从句表示转折。 wW<"l"x,
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10.making 改为 make。