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4.第一个do改为 are。与前面的is相对应。 e!J5h <:
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5.that改为what。that引导的是定语从句，在本句中应该使用关系代词what，相当于the thing/ things that。 'A|c\sy
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8.suffer改为go或become或be。或把hungry改为hunger。 od#Lad@p
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9.therefore改为however。此处的条件状语从句表示转折。 R:n|1]*f3X
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10.making 改为 make。
