Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Immoral Behavior in Public. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below: 9gVu:o 1/
1.我们经常在公共场合见到各种不道德的行为，叙述你的一次相关经历。 `qnSq(tNq
2.这些不文明行为会有哪些影响。 89e<,f`h
3.我们应该怎样改善这种现象。 3qwi) nm
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这是一篇议论文，可以根据作文要求列出提纲：第一部分，列举不文明行为并叙述一次相关经历;第二部分，不文明行为的影响，一两个即可;第三部分，提出建议。 [v h&o-6
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To witness 1immoral behavior in public, one need only visit the Beijing subway. I still remember the first time I took the Beijing subway. It was an early morning. I was in a hurry to go to school. When I was trying to get a ticket, I found a lot of people waiting in front of me, but nobody was in the line. .`*h 2
1Immoral behaviors in public 2initiate a series of problems. One of the most serious ones is that it may exert a negative impact on our 3sense of social responsibility. We will keep ignoring other people’s rights and feelings, and in turn, we too will be disrespected some day. j ;}!Yn
The reform of1 this phenomenon is certainly not easy. With an eye on practical 2implementation and 3cost effectiveness , I propose that society make it clear in every way that people who fail to respect the ④common good will be seriously punished. Stricter policies for this should be made to correct this phenomenon as soon as possible. wXI6KN-
We all expect “A World without Thieves". Everyone 1shares the huge responsibility of 2demonstrating his or her justice at the proper time. Personal responsibility is vital to build a harmonious socialist society. t
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1 immoral behavior in public：直接点题 MG6taOO!
◇第二段思路点评： EAafi <n
不文明行为的影响 whFaL}2C
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1 immoral behavior in public：重复名词词组，与第一段衔接 f/+UD-@%m
2 initiate：意思是“产生，发动” 7HfA{.|m
3sense of social responsibility：意思是“社会责任感” ${ fJ]
◇第三段思路点评： (Klvctoy
如何改善这些现象 >wx
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◇语言点提示： tA;#yM;
1 this phenomenon：指代前文“immoral behavior in public”，与上文衔接，且避免重复 yvN; |R
2implementation：意为“执行，实施” (b!`klQ
3cost effectiveness：意为“成本效率” Rf*cW&}%
④ common good：意为“公益” @ px 4[
◇第四段思路点评： =VXxQ\{
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◇语言点提示： [@K#BFA
1share a huge responsibility: 意为“承担重大责任” :x*#RnRr.
2demonstrate：意为“展现” ?
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Should We still Cherish Chinese Traditional Virtues. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below: Q--Hf$D]H
1. 当今的年轻人越来越强调个性发展; U`*L` PM
2. 发展个性是否意味着忽视中国的传统美德; ftr? @^
3. 你的观点。 -%I 0Q
●审题概述● N5 ]}m:"pk
这是一篇议论文，题目比较大。主要讨论个性发展和传统美德之间的关系。根据提示，可分为三部分：年轻人的个性发展，可以适当举例;个性发展是否意味着忽视传统美德，可以笼统地讲，也可以具体地解释某一种美德;最后提出自己的观点。
