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so much without having to do anything in turn. In addition, __2__ 6p=OM=R
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the way that he used to as a child, he will suffer hungry. __8__ @Czj] t`
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the laws of his parents, he may go to prison. If, therefore, __9__ |i/Iv
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6.not改为no。固定搭配的副词短语“no longer” uyp|
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9.therefore改为however。此处的条件状语从句表示转折。 u4W2{
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10.making 改为 make。