作文备考:创造闪光点 作文亮一点!
*>lXCx 作文是各类英语考试中得分率最低的题型之一。同学们在掌握了一定的作文模板,和基本的语法、词汇、句型用法之后,如果能在作文中创造一些词汇和句型的闪光点,必定会使你的作文如虎添翼!
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jyRz53 1:是否长短句交叉;沪江四六级
http://cet.hjenglish.com #\LYo{op/. 2、是否会使用插入语;
Ht~YSQ~:y 3、用词是否多样,准确,形象,尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;
xUB{{8B:L 4、关键词是否换用,切勿老用重复词;
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~y :?w(GD 下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项:
]rO/IuB 1. 适当用被动替换主动,这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段:It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so,its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively. 沪江四六级
http://cet.hjenglish.com o~'UWU'# 2. 善于使用插入语,比如说把副词、连接词等,作插入语放在中间,一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。
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sFRQFX0XoY 3. 一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think,
6#2E {uy;R people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中,applicable替换proper, approaches替换ways, implement替换carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替换enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)
].N%A07 下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子,看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了,作文有了很大的提高。
~H626vT37 Computer and I ( By Simmy )
KC-@2,c9V I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that I indulged myself in googling an army of useful information I had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.
YD;"_yH exceedingly 替换 very
9E thrilling 替换 exciting
8ao>]5Rs3 sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth.
^ Mq8jw(2 google 替换 search
%T~LK=m an army of 替换 a lot of
8wzQr2: The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!
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The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型,用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情; Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular
b5UIX Kim Coincident with … 非常地道的句型,表达“与…一致”的意思,替换 With …
pIvr*UzY Advancement 替换 development
RV6|sN[x> Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换 enter into
|\h<!xR Current ( currently )替换 now
Y^}c+)t Appeal to sb. 替换 sb. be interested in sth.
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qoJ<e`h} It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型, 说某事是毫不夸张的
@D=i|f For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.
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[hKt4]R We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法
W0N*c*k our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被动
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JA6#qlylL Deliver 替换 send
)ZDqj There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence, porn pictures emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.
690;\O ' There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 这个句子有三个精彩之处,首先There is no denying that这个句型,还有however作为插入语, function in the disservice of 替换 do harm to
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IY1"j0O Emerging 替换 appearing ( fading 替换 disappearing ) Net citizen 网民,属于精彩用词
C3e0d~C As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should, therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.
+Uf+` No garden has no weeds 替换 Every coin has two sides
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