作文备考：创造闪光点 作文亮一点！
sv0) sL 作文是各类英语考试中得分率最低的题型之一。同学们在掌握了一定的作文模板，和基本的语法、词汇、句型用法之后，如果能在作文中创造一些词汇和句型的闪光点，必定会使你的作文如虎添翼！
$R3]y9`? 高分作文标志:
# Jv|zf5Z 1：是否长短句交叉；沪江四六级
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=7@N'xX 下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：
*2ZX*w37 1. 适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively. 沪江四六级
http://cet.hjenglish.com &FF%VUfQJ 2. 善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。
I@a y&NNh 如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。
}{Ab:+aNd 比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …
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p< i;@H;: people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替换proper, approaches替换ways, implement替换carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替换enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)
U|QLc 下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。
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BbEWa I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that I indulged myself in googling an army of useful information I had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.
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Q>R jv.1 thrilling 替换 exciting
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#@s[!4)_I The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!
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oasp/Y.p For a start 替换 To begin with
oYOR%'0*m+ We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法
i\~@2 our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被动
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$*N^ bj Deliver 替换 send
]fxYS m There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence, porn pictures emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.
KrVP#|9%" There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先There is no denying that这个句型，还有however作为插入语， function in the disservice of 替换 do harm to
\Z NUt$\ Emerging 替换 appearing ( fading 替换 disappearing ) Net citizen 网民，属于精彩用词
Ruy qB>[o As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should, therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.
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vndD#/lXq A slice of 替换 a part of
@fz0-vT, Unfavorable 替换 bad
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:$k] ; We should, therefore, take advantage of … 使用插入语
Bs?B\k= Fruits (而且fruits 用的非常形象， merits/ virtues) 替换 advantage ( defects 替换 disadvantage ) Facet 替换 aspect
8d|/^U.w~V 以下是27个经典的替换词，各位同学可以参考一下:
Dk ^,iY(u 1.individuals,characters, folks替换(people ,persons)
E4}MU}C#[ 2: positive, favorable, rosy (美好的)，promising
hYvWD.c} (有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替换good
A^L8" 3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替换bad
9Rf})$o+ 如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive替换
M\m6|P eg. An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation, as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive. 沪江四六级
http://cet.hjenglish.com %imI.6 4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替换many.
fx74h{3u 注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有词。
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bM@8[&t a 6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替think (因为是书面语，所以要加that)
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A?zxF5rfp 11: Increasing(ly), growing 替换more and more ( 注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.
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?S2!'L 18.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换cause.
QnMN8 Q9 19.desire 替换want.
2EAY`}Rl6. 20.pour attention into 替换pay attention to
IpYw<2' 21.bear in mind that 替换remember沪江四六级
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http://cet.hjenglish.com Cn"L*\ o 24.frown on sth替换 be against , disagree with sth
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~i5t1 25.bear in mind that 代替remember
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iS#m{1m$$ 27. next to/virtually impossible,代替nearly impossible
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