作文备考：创造闪光点 作文亮一点！
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{ 作文是各类英语考试中得分率最低的题型之一。同学们在掌握了一定的作文模板，和基本的语法、词汇、句型用法之后，如果能在作文中创造一些词汇和句型的闪光点，必定会使你的作文如虎添翼！
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5 高分作文标志:
c3]X#Qa#m$ 1：是否长短句交叉；沪江四六级
http://cet.hjenglish.com }=T=Z#OgH 2、是否会使用插入语；
x! R pRq9 3、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词；
|| 0n%"h>i 4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词；
/@qnEP% 5、句型使用是否准确、地道。
(W'.vEl 下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：
_&xi})E^O] 1. 适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively. 沪江四六级
http://cet.hjenglish.com ).D+/D/"2 2. 善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。
<]e 0TU?bk 如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。
vWpoaz/w 比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …
BfUM+RC%5 3. 一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think,
;2\+O"}4H people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替换proper, approaches替换ways, implement替换carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替换enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)
bjCO@t 下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。
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1X XuFa& Coincident with … 非常地道的句型，表达“与…一致”的意思，替换 With …
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o7i>D6^^ Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换 enter into
EJ@&vuDd$ Current ( currently )替换 now
s{9 G// Appeal to sb. 替换 sb. be interested in sth.
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Cno+rmsfT It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型， 说某事是毫不夸张的
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slTE. We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法
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=JNCQu There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence, porn pictures emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.
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SceK$ As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should, therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.
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19b@QgfWpb Unfavorable 替换 bad
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T5Iz{Ha We should, therefore, take advantage of … 使用插入语
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=P %?{7 1.individuals,characters, folks替换(people ,persons)
%xrldn% 2: positive, favorable, rosy (美好的)，promising
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H<3:1*E 3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替换bad
,T*\ 9' Q 如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive替换
L*OG2liJ eg. An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation, as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive. 沪江四六级
http://cet.hjenglish.com =~ k}XB 4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替换many.
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@?>5~ 5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替换some
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L1WvX6 Eg. Sth has gained growing popularity. Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.
U{qwhz( 12..beneficial, rewarding替换helpful,
Vw3=jIQN:! 13.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替换customer
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=f23lA 18.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换cause.
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m>3\1`ZF~< 25.to name only a few, as an example替换 for example, for instance
lauq(aD_C 25.bear in mind that 代替remember
=(Y0wZP| 26.to name only a few, as an example代替 for example
MttFB;T p 27. next to/virtually impossible,代替nearly impossible
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For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.
|/$954Hr#< There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.
~=t9-AF- As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.
