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(1)As is vividly depicted in the picture ,which seems to be humorous and ridiculous but thought-prooking on second thoughts.(2)The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelieably ,(3)Recent few years has witnessed a phenomenon of 主题 which seems to be disastrous to indiidual surial and prosperity. (4)This phenomenon of 主题 should be condemned seerely or made illegal. (5)There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly coneyed should be gien deep consideration. y'O{8Q8T
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(1) To account for the aboe-mentioned phenomenon seeral serious effects hae been put forward. (2)To begin with主题 not only results does harm to our physical and mental health but also results in a frustrating and humiliating life. (3)In addition nothing is more harmful than主题 to contradict with a harmonious society. (4)Last but not the least no issue is as harmful as 主题 to increase family burdens which is a threatening situation we are unwilling to see. (5)No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below . According to a surey made by China Daily 63.93% of young people who hae eer experienced主题will lie a dull life or een feel loss of hope about the future. (7)If we cannot take useful means we may not control this trend and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly we will see the gloomy future of something. [5eT|uy
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(1)From what hae been discussed aboe it is therefore necessary that some effectie measures are taken to preent主题. (2)On the one hand we should be sensible to strengthen the enforcement of the laws to protect something. (3)On the other hand it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of saing somebody out of the eil hands of destruction. (4)Howeer it is easier said than done. (5)Although the fight against it is long-standing and tremendous oneour efforts will eentually pay off. Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later. N5Mz=UgB
(1)As is iidly depicted in the picture(描述图画).(2) The most striking feature is(图画重点信息).(3)There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly coneyed should be gien deep consideration. UR2)e{RXg
(1)As is symbolically reealed in the set of drawings the fact that(重复上面的图画信息) profoundly indicates that team work is momentous (重要的) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. (2)Undoubtedly it is team work that keeps us continually doing something aluable and admirable in spite of difficulty that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success. (3)If we don not cooperate sincerely we will lie a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated or feel loss of hope about the future. (4)As far as I am concerned there are seeral adantages that can be gien as below. To begin with nothing is more beneficial than team work to oercome our defects and improe our efficiency. (5)Secondly no issue is as good as team work to make our life more colorful and energetic.No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. (7)A person who is assigned arious jobs along the production lines will make a mess just because no one can be proficient in all the things. Only by cooperating with other people can you put your capacities into full play and can you be the winner in the society. k Q(y^t W
(1)From what hae been discussed aboeit admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties it is much better for one to inole yourself into a team work. (2)It is therefore necessary that some effectie measures are taken to make your team work more efficient. (3)On the one hand we should be sensible to be receptie to other people’s opinions and benefits. (4)On the other hand it is demanding for us to be always helpful and honest to other people.(5) Howeer it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later. *=9#tYn~
话题:坚持不懈---------------在失败的时候坚持 做好每一件小事为成功做好准备. /P"\+Qp
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profoundly indicates that perseerance is momentous (重要的) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds.任何积极话题必然与成功有联系,成功是衡量该话题是否积极的唯一标准。该段首句设置爆发力句型,增加气势,让老师给出很高的第一印象分,借此开头很有特色。 K/+C6Y?
Perseerance means that people can persist on when they face the difficulty and prepare eery detail for the coming success.定义法论述:毅力—在困境中坚持,做好细节,准备成功; ",V5*1w
It is perseerance that keeps us continually doing something aluable and admirable that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success.强调并列句是英语的极品句型,大气磅礴。此万能句子是任何积极事物都可以帮助我们克服困难征服挑战走向成功. f:&OOD o
Unless we stick to our dream(适当把主题词进行同义替换)we will lie a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated only to be eliminated. 双重否定句子从反面论证宏观说明危害性,如果缺乏该积极事物就生活郁闷挫折被竞争所淘汰。 To account for the aboe mentioned topic seeral reasons can be put forward as mentioned below. To begin with In addition Last but not the least No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. (举例证明把for example 写成十四个很有特色,而且表明下面的例子很重要,又增加一分,老师看了这么多for example,审美疲劳,老师一看该句,一定激动。 M #&L@fg!
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