转贴:考博英语写作模板 58mzh82+
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1. 开头万能公式一:名人名言 j
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有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编!原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧? KOV^wSwS
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A proberb says, “ You are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言) fH`P8?](x
It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (适用于自编名言) S!#7]wtbP
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As everyone knows, No one can deny that… -tF5$pb'
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2. 开头万能公式二:数字统计 v8y77:
原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的,可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一,但编无妨,只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型: ?fnJ`^|-r
According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college b^y#.V.|k
students wanted to further their study after their graduation. *Y9"-C+
看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造: AQbbIngo
Honesty bV@53_)N2
根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。 GJy><'J,!>
Travel by Bike 1#(,Bq4
根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。 w]"Y1J(i
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根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。 (vz)GrH>
Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work? y:iE'SRRK6
根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。 A8e b{qv
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1. 结尾万能公式一:如此结论 fyYv}z
说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子: Q'*-gg&)
Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good P;MS
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manners arise from politeness and respect for others. >f'nl
如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了! q_OIzZ@
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to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus [jDO8n/
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Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that… ,{%/$7)
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2. 结尾万能公式二:如此建议 ~bigaY
如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话,那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了,因为这里虽然也是废话,但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽! un W{ZfEC
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve @]H&(bw
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这里的虚拟语气用得很经典,因为考官本来经常考这个句型,而如果我们自己写出来,你说考官会怎么想呢? Ea!}r|~]0
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Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken. K?-K<3]9f
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写作的“七项基本原则”:一、 长 短 句原则 工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题: !ye%A&
As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is
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satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite bt%k;Z]
similar. ;NLL?6~
如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记! H!Uy4L~>
强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。二、 主 题 句原则 #Sb1oLC
国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事! (G#)[0<fX
特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的! wMt?yc:X
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prepared before the exam(主题句). Without sufficient preparation, `9a%}PVQ-
you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、 C~'}RM
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三、一 二 三原则 }4cLU.L8O
领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点… J:#B,2F+^
如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。 <G 2;nvRr
1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗) 2~R"3c+^
2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗) !f
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3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗) ouVR[w>V
4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, ^uIZs}=+
lastly(不推荐,原因:俗) -H Zvz[u
5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐) )w;XicT
6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐) t+m$lqm
7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐) ^YenS6`F
8)most important of all, moreover, finally j\@s pbE@
9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况) )3h=V^rm
10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况) qIA!m
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建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚! p8Lb*7W
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四、 短语优先原则 uZm<:d2%)
写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如: > ^n'
I cannot bear it. ;oob
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可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it. <MT_zET
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可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it. d/Zt}{
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五、 多实少虚原则 ^a<=@0|
原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再比如: isWB)$q
走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room L
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所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩! <mrLld#_:C
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六、 多变句式原则 P*I\FV
1)加法(串联) 6st(s@>
都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说: 2[j|:Ng7
I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar. (t<i?>p
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Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm. LO#{
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2)转折(拐弯抹角) 3,N7Nfe
批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。 wT*`Od8w
The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition. C[gSiL
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3)因果(so, so, so) ZPZ1
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The snow began to fall, so we went home. G!0|ocE}
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4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重) ^B1vvb
有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。 kIXLB!L2b^
举例:This is what I can do. -VRu^l#
Whether he can go with us or not is not sure. L d#
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5)附加(多此一举) aASnk2DFd
如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。 LNg[fF^:
The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine. W=F?+KgL
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Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going. :Tj,;0#/
其实很简单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但是whom VMen:
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6)排比(排山倒海句) [gQ~B1O
文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势! G
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to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (气势恢宏) mnu7Y([2>
要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!七) 挑战极限原则 9D8el}uHf
既然十挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀! 2"V?+Hhz
原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如: eDTEy;^o
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如果您可一些出这样的句子,不得高分才怪! 3R4-MK
文章主体段落三大杀手锏:一、举实例 思维短路,举实例!提出一个观点,举实例!提出一个方案,举实例!而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式,任何情况下,只要我们无法继续文章,不管三七二十一,尽管举例子! PX]A1Kt?
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方法:写完一个要点,比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点,再比较与之相反的; v?d~H`L
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on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, N,Y<m
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没话说了,可以换一句话再说,让你的文章在多一些字,或者文邹邹地说,是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。实际就是重复重复再重复!下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you! rxm!'.+
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可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it. BnAia3z
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