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2。开头万能公式二:数字统计原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。原则上在议论文当中不应该出现虚假数字的,可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一,但编无妨,只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型:According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation. %5RR<[_/;
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根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。Travel by Bike s@Dln
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根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。Youth !7Eodq-0
根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work? 5`Q j<
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Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others. 27k(`{K
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As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar. 5?lc%,-&
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