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,v*p 1. 开头万能公式一:名人名言
)WVItqQKV 有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编!
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mQJ4;BJw 经典句型:
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$N;"}Gz It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.
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Km)X_}| 更多经典句型:
q%-&[%l As everyone knows, No one can deny that…
vuR5}/Ev 2. 开头万能公式二:数字统计
~$4]HDg 原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。
B2~f;zy` 原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的,可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一,但编无妨,只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型:
F0&~ ?2nG According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college
bZ>&QM students wanted to further their study after their graduation.
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$%g\YdC Honesty
pi`;I*f/ 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。
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K??1,I 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。
]alh_U Youth
g4N%PV8 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。
/M3y)K`^ Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?
cz2,",+~ 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
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\Yj#2ww [ njx7d 结尾万能公式:
Z^s+vi y7/PDB\he 1. 结尾万能公式一:如此结论
k/G7.)C 说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:
79D=d'eA Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good
bH*@,EE manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
Q[M (Wqg 如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了!
'!!e+\h# 更多过渡短语:
Mx8Gu^FW.d to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus
DU;[btK> 更多句型:
|/VL35b Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
tpXa*6 2. 结尾万能公式二:如此建议
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2\VAmPG.Zs Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve
4E2yH6l the problem.
F\5X7ditD 这里的虚拟语气用得很经典,因为考官本来经常考这个句型,而如果我们自己写出来,你说考官会怎么想呢?
%JQ~!3 更多句型:
u?F (1iN= Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.
-I ?z-?<D Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be
tQrS3Hz'nA taken.
Uo2+:p 写作的“七项基本原则”:一、长 短 句原则
MM#i t=u 1?(cmXj 工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:
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T"?Y5t`( 如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!
!EOQhh 强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。二、
kn}zgSO 主 题 句原则
GW3>&j_!d 国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!
DzC Df@TB" 特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的!
l&L,7BX To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully
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T~Ly^|Ihz 一 二 三原则
jY/ARBC}H 领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点…
! Z;T-3^. 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。
#op:/j 1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)
l4vTU= 2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗)
oQT2S>cm^ 3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗)
"_< 9PM1t 4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place,
>;4!O%F lastly(不推荐,原因:俗)
p|3b/plZ 5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)
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T#EFXHPr 7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)
#DFp[\)1 8)most important of all, moreover, finally
53Yxz3v 9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)
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e[1>(l}Ss 建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!四、短语优先原则
c8Z A5| 写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如:
w^q7n I cannot bear it.
E.`6oX\L| 可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.
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V`#.7uUP 可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it.
lpgd#vr 这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。五、多实少虚原则
8(f:U@BS 原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous,
+G*JrwJ&= humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital
9QwKakci 之类的形象词。再比如:
''H"^oS 走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room
AjkW0FB:1 但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room
UZ2TqR *****走出房间应该说:sail out of the room
)Si2u5 小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room
R>/NE!q 老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room
}TB(7bbd; 所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩!六、多变句式原则
!H@0MQ7 1)加法(串联)
:E&g%'1 都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and,
(MLwQiop 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说:
hK|j6xf.o I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.
+4))/`DA 如果是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式:
BU|#e5 Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.
9?<{_' 其它的短语可以用:
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QDx$==Fo 2)转折(拐弯抹角)
Q~{H@D`< 批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。
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&;&ho+qD The coat was thin, but it was warm.
k,yZ[n|` 更多的短语:
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Ho;X4lo[j despite, notwithstanding
A/7{oB:a 3)因果(so, so, so)
*)M49a*UD 昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友…可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!
7&qy5y-Ap The snow began to fall, so we went home.
BZ!v%4^9 更多短语:
&-d&t` ` then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a
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\R36w^c3 4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)
j)C,%Ol 有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。
o%9*B%HO/ 举例:This is what I can do.
/1mW|O>0 Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.
0j"8@< 同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分:
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9l,a^@Y: 如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。
tg]x0#@s The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.
&0 >Loja`^ I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.
6f')6X'x Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.
)M6w5g 其实很简单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但是whom
$hivlI-7Ko or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。
b2b^1{@h;v 6)排比(排山倒海句)
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IiY/(N+J to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (气势恢宏)
S30?VG9U0f 要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!七、挑战极限原则
VeW>[08 既然十挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀!
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.Fdgb4>BXX The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb
0q&<bV:D the Western Hills.
-r-k_6QP Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about
W[Ls|<Q three times that of China.
qWQ/'M 如果您可一些出这样的句子,不得高分才怪!
q@[QjGj@ 文章主体段落三大杀手锏:一、举实例
_lamn}(x0 ["h5!vj 思维短路,举实例!提出一个观点,举实例!提出一个方案,举实例!而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式,任何情况下,只要我们无法继续文章,不管三七二十一,尽管举例子!
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WA+iYLx@H sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance.
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gt@m?w( 更多句型:
#qK:J;Sn3 To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…,
f&Gt| for example二、做比较
)h7<?@wv& 方法:写完一个要点,比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点,再比较与之相反的;
lhy*h_> 世界上没有同样的指纹,没有相同的树叶,文章亦同,只有通过比较,你才会发现二者的相同点(through
http://www.freekaobo.com/post.php?fid=67 |olA9mp|] comparison)和不同点(through contrast)。下面是一些短语:
aDU<wxnSvO 相似的比较:
Ff)8Q.m in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner
N sXHO 相反的比较:
MN\HDKN on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead,
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2LF/H$]o5 …三、换言之
.P8&5i)'P, 没话说了,可以换一句话再说,让你的文章在多一些字,或者文邹邹地说,是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。
!LNayk's> 实际就是重复重复再重复!下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you!
Ayxkv)%:@) I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you.
uvkz'R= I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love
0XE4<U with you.
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bCRV\myd` I cannot bear it.
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wW>A_{Y 因此可以这样说:I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with
xF!,IKlBBp it or I am fed up with it.
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