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1.是否漏掉动词“to be" CDnz
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3.复数名词后面是否漏了s j#t8Krd] "
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4.每二个单数可数名词之前必须有限定词(determiner) BWdc^
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etc. 对于不少考生来说,判断究竟在什么地方需要加冠词非常困难。但是有一种相对 ih |Ky+ !
较简单的规则,即每个单数可数名词之前必须有限定词。 y[6&46r7D
5.作文中的时态有无变化。如有变化,看一下是否有正当理由 _G #"B{7
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看它是否同前一个动词在时态上一致。如果不一致,查看一下时态的改变是否有依据。 917 0bmr
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句子中的限定动词和连接词。动词数应该比连接词数多1个。为了便于检查,在写作 ?%/u/*9rj
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考生需要将这些信息转换成正确的英语语言。在每个要点项下,再加上一些支持 k\sM;bCv7
性的英语语句;为了使文章富有可读性,考生还必须注意卷面的美观和书写的工整。 M'zS7=F!:
从宏观结构层面考察研究生英文作文,我们应注意的另一个问题是一致性问题, 2FIR]@MQd
也就是点和支持论点的论据之间必须具有逻辑性。除此之外,论点之间应注意主 wp%FM
次之分,必须做重点突出。恰当地将文章分成不同的段落,有助于体现各部分的 Zxc7nLKF~
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言点明主题,使者了解文章的主旨(Thesis)。中间段落经常是作文的主干内容。可 ]osx.
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题句说明文章主题。结尾段落用来归纳概或重新说明主题观点,也可以用来说明 hB7pR"P
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则围绕主题句加以阐明、补充或论证。这种补充意义的句子称为支持句(Supporting sentence)。一般说来,主题句写在段落的开端,后面的支持句为主题句提供论证或细节。 F;u7A]H^
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cause of lung cancer'’或“Heart disease is also increasing.”等句子,段落就缺乏一致性。 Gb2L }
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•每段的中心思想要明确,全段的句子都应该围绕说明一个问题; P!G858V(
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