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1.是否漏掉动词“to be" }\L!;6oy
一般来说,每个句子(或分句)必须有一个动词作谓语。看一下每个句子中是否都有 SJc@iffS
动词。如缺少动词,那么很可能漏掉的就是动词“to be"。 9Y@?xn.\
2.在第三人称单数后的动词是否漏掉s(指现在时) ~nc([%!=
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3.复数名词后面是否漏了s !"x7r
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etc. 对于不少考生来说,判断究竟在什么地方需要加冠词非常困难。但是有一种相对
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6.是否漏掉连接词 MAD}Tv\S7
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句子中的限定动词和连接词。动词数应该比连接词数多1个。为了便于检查,在写作 LUDJPIk
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性的英语语句;为了使文章富有可读性,考生还必须注意卷面的美观和书写的工整。 r2GK_$vd
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言点明主题,使者了解文章的主旨(Thesis)。中间段落经常是作文的主干内容。可 )o9Q5Lq
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题句说明文章主题。结尾段落用来归纳概或重新说明主题观点,也可以用来说明 *K,
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则围绕主题句加以阐明、补充或论证。这种补充意义的句子称为支持句(Supporting sentence)。一般说来,主题句写在段落的开端,后面的支持句为主题句提供论证或细节。 A[`G^$
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