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2. 开头万能公式二:数字统计 [CXrSST")E
原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。 >)M`IU[d^.
原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的,可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一,但编无妨,只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型: "\o+v|;
According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation. "$N+"3I
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Honesty esMX-.8Cx
根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。 +N:o-9
Travel by Bike yooX$
根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。 %~E ?Z!_W
Youth )]H-BIuGm
根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。 K)DDk9*
Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work? )E-inHD
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根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。 t7j);W%e6
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1. 结尾万能公式一:如此结论 #/Vh|UeX
说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子: d\R,Q
Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others. !y@NAa0
如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了! a!"$~y$*
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工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题: _wkVwPr
As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar. )Ch2E|C?=8
如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记! -0$55pa/@:
强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。 "$ Y_UJT7
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五、 多实少虚原则 ;pqg/>W'
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原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous, (yF:
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有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。 4`!Z$k
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文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势! Q
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文章主体段落三大杀手锏: n(L\||#+
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