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As everyone knows, No one can deny that… D7qOZlX16
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2. 开头万能公式二:数字统计 IdxzE_@
原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。 G<;*
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According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation. 5i{j' {_(8
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根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。 HiJE}V;Vq
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根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。 -;k+GrLr^
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根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。 SOvF[,+
Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work? qA5r
根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。 T37XBg H
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1. 结尾万能公式一:如此结论 1D!<'`)AY
说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子: I ?.^ho
Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others. -!]ZMi9
如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了! >t_6B~x9
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一、 长短句原则 PBkt~=j
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工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题: (0y~%J
As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar. s#=7IH30
如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记! S\!ana])
强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。 #"iu|D
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五、 多实少虚原则 v4c[(&
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4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重) Q}K#'Og
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Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you. .J.-Mm`.
Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides. Z@&Dki
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