开头万能公式: lSxb:$g
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经典句型: ]PXM;w
A proberb says, “ You are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言) UcRP/LR%C
It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. {v?Q9
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2. 开头万能公式二:数字统计 *dl hRa
原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。 jK|n^5\
原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的,可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一,但编无妨,只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型: Q6h+.
According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation. bi<<z-q`wJ
看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造: {,>G 1>Yv
Honesty 3I6ocj[,
根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。 s8h
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Travel by Bike #:K=zV\
根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。 8z=#
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根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。 o) )` "^
Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work? inut'@=G/
根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。 KC/O
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结尾万能公式: NxP(&M(
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1. 结尾万能公式一:如此结论 i|:!I)(lh
说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子: /jv/qk3i
Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others. D|uvgu2
如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了! ,\4]uZ<
更多过渡短语: <WXVUEea
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2. 结尾万能公式二:如此建议 U>S
如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话,那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了,因为这里虽然也是废话,但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽! 7|,L{~
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve (r|m&/
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这里的虚拟语气用得很经典,因为考官本来经常考这个句型,而如果我们自己写出来,你说考官会怎么想呢? t"=5MaQk-
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一、 长短句原则 yl[I
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工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题: (< +A w7
As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar. Hw \of
如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记! WZQ2Mi<&1'
强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。 $ XjijD9R
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6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐) 3](hMk,}
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9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况) P~a@{n*8
10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况) _dKMBcl)E
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五、 多实少虚原则 ad}8~6}_&
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原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous, W&hW N9iR
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六、 多变句式原则 ,zgz7
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1)加法(串联) lTC0kh
都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and, 35l%iaj]G5
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I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar. 3CD#OCz7&
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2)转折(拐弯抹角) y'm!h?8
批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。 O14QlIk
The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition. <|l}@\iRX
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The snow began to fall, so we went home. [2-n*a(q
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4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重) Go{,<
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有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。 u9~5U9]O%6
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Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going. J$51z
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6)排比(排山倒海句) 8GP17j
文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势! @[lMh9`
Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you. dCi:@+z8
Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides. 'TS_Am?o
We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (气势恢宏) _;03R{e*
要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可! ^m%#1Zd
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原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如: $ztsb V}
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如果您可一些出这样的句子,不得高分才怪! M?lh1Yu"
文章主体段落三大杀手锏: U=bx30brh%
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一、举实例 ^
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In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance. AI2XNSV@Yl
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