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x 1. 开头万能公式一:名人名言
uH`ds+Hp 有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编!
[QeKT8 原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧?
4((Z8@iX/ 经典句型:
%e_WO,R A proberb says, “ You are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言)
u+{5c5_ It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.
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f 2. 开头万能公式二:数字统计
E]Kd`&^} 原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。
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)U8F6GIC&} According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college
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m"u 9AOH k 看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造:
U;ev3 Honesty
1`b?nX 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。
Il!iqDHz3 Travel by Bike
F/mD05{ 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。
594$X@!v Youth
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<;M 6s~ Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?
|IZG`3 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
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ZN^9w"A (gz|6N 结尾万能公式:
vw3%u+Z& &AA u: 1. 结尾万能公式一:如此结论
Ro?yCy:L' 说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:
IgZX,4i=o Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good
D`iWf3a. manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
SrU,-mA W 如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了!
@ -g^R4e< 更多过渡短语:
&:w{[H$- to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus
hnL(~ 更多句型:
jUdW o}/ Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
BYP,}yzA 2. 结尾万能公式二:如此建议
;v#~o* 如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话,那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了,因为这里虽然也是废话,但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽!
m&b!\"0 Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve
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[96|xe\s 这里的虚拟语气用得很经典,因为考官本来经常考这个句型,而如果我们自己写出来,你说考官会怎么想呢?
Kq{9:G 更多句型:
Z3"f7l6 Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.
dEns|r Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be
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QfRt3\^` 写作的“七项基本原则”:一、长 短 句原则
)";g*4R[ \/lH]u\x 工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:
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JEX8M 如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!
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0|HD(d`a 国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!
pOpie5)7X 特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的!
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Q_qc_IcM y prepared before the exam(主题句). Without sufficient preparation,
jats)!: you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、
X{<j%PdC 一 二 三原则
p7Gs 领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点…
IgQW 5E# 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。
Ga"$_DyM 1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)
kMf]~EZ? 2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗)
p 8Ts5n 3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗)
gfFP-J3cN 4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place,
Z,_yE*q lastly(不推荐,原因:俗)
N@)tU;U3O 5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)
&=xm>;`3 6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)
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7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)
BoHMz/DB 8)most important of all, moreover, finally
IH'DCY: 9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)
`` 6?;Y 10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)
hd8:| _ 建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!四、短语优先原则
w-"o?;)a 写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如:
[x'xbQLGd I cannot bear it.
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,ZC ^,Vq I want it.
5kofO 可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it.
Sz.jv#Y 这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。五、多实少虚原则
LTm2B_+ 原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous,
oZA?}#DRl humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital
ix=HLF-0zC 之类的形象词。再比如:
>s1'I:8 走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room
JD^(L~ n] 但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room
Q!(C$&f *****走出房间应该说:sail out of the room
> 't=r 小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room
<9@I50; 老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room
e@Q<hb0<eU 所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩!六、多变句式原则
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{ 1)加法(串联)
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,q] Wi# 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说:
&s>HiL>f I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.
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c6:"5};_ Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.
jV;&*4if 其它的短语可以用:
OQ;DqV besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
Hc ]/0: 2)转折(拐弯抹角)
]s?BwLU6 批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。
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/d ?) despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of,
Z$ {I4a despite, notwithstanding
TL ;2,@H` 3)因果(so, so, so)
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qOVs9'R 有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。
;Oh4W<hH} 举例:This is what I can do.
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X3vTyIsn 同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分:
eN fo8xUG When to go, Why he goes away…
,'?%z>RZm 5)附加(多此一举)
Pou-AzEP$ 如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。
)T/"QF}<T The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.
p:U9#(v) I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.
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O'{UAb+- 其实很简单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但是whom
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1H`T=:P? 文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!
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h$.y)v 要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!七、挑战极限原则
6*9hAnH 既然十挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀!
iD+Q\l;% 原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如:
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#D~atgR 如果您可一些出这样的句子,不得高分才怪!
(~}IoQp> 文章主体段落三大杀手锏:一、举实例
|3`Sd;^; +U_> Bo 思维短路,举实例!提出一个观点,举实例!提出一个方案,举实例!而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式,任何情况下,只要我们无法继续文章,不管三七二十一,尽管举例子!
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7WK^eW"y8 更多句型:
Z ?` To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…,
l]D?S]{a for example二、做比较
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'X&sH/>r 世界上没有同样的指纹,没有相同的树叶,文章亦同,只有通过比较,你才会发现二者的相同点(through
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`(s&H8x# 相似的比较:
%B+W#Q` in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner
KPO?eeT.WZ 相反的比较:
a_Y*pOu on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead,
<?UbzT7X nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …,
SXkUtY$ …三、换言之
DZo7T! 没话说了,可以换一句话再说,让你的文章在多一些字,或者文邹邹地说,是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。
(XW\4msB)I 实际就是重复重复再重复!下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you!
AuIb>@a I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you.
5|S|S))_Q I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love
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g-`HKoKe 因此可以这样说:I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with
bH4'j/3 it or I am fed up with it.
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