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英语作文的总体评分原则（内容与语言两个方面） $i@EfujY
记分标准如下： w&"w"
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13-15（20－17）分：内容切题，包括题中所列三方面的内容：清楚表达其内涵，文字连贯；句式有变化，句子结构和用词正确。文章长度符合要求。 M',D
10-12（16－13）分：内容切题，包括题中所列三方面的内容；比较清楚地表达其内涵；文字基本连贯；句式有一定变化，句子结构和用词无重大错误。文章长度符合要求。 8-"5|pNc
7-9（12－9）分：内容切题，基本包括题中所列三方面的内容：基本清楚地表达其内涵；句子结构和用词有少量错误。文章长度符合要求。 0#[f2X62B
4-6（8－5）分：内容基本功题，基本包含题中所列三方面的内容；语句可以理解，但有较多的句子结构和词错误。文章长度基本符合要求。 oe |e+
1-3（ 4－1）分：基本按要求写作，但只有少数句子可理解。 o$ce1LO?|N
0分：文不切题，语句混乱、无法理解。 v7 (|K
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1） 有较好的写作基础，文章流畅，遣词造句不当，文章结构完整，内容符合要求； $XQx WH|
2） 语法基本正确； uT} TSwgp
3） 句法基本准确，句子与句子段落之间过渡连贯； v$m[#&O^V?
4） 有一定词汇量，字数符合要求； <i'u 96
5） 说理清楚，内容充实。 ~'2r&?=\
6） 就小作文而言，还要做到格式与语域正确。 ;:4P'FWm^
7） 书写干净整洁。如果书写较差，以致影响交际，分数会降低一个档次。 uR ;-eK
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不会审题 w2d]96*kQe
用汉语思维，逐字翻译。 zNny\ Z
用词搭配不当。 6%.
词汇量小，拼写困难。 3_MS'&M
句子逻辑关系混乱。 adI!W-/R:
Our English class often told stories. >&;>PZBPCO
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不会应用关联词转承上下句子和段落。 2 {e dW+
People learn English to use it , Some learn it to study or work abroad . Others learn it to read books and magazines in English or have something to do with English-speaking foreigners.采用适当关联词，改进为:people learn English for practical purposes :some learn it to study or work abroad, while others learn it to read or communicate in English. S,9NUt
语法错误。 !ww :O| 0
i. 分不清及物与不及物动词，例如：rise和raise; hear和listen等 l
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ii. 被动与主动语态的误用，例如：interesting和interested; speaking和spoken 等； 5L-lpT8P
iii. 词类混淆，将动词或形容词误作名词用，将名词和动词误作形容词用等；例如：benefit和beneficial; difficult和difficulty; pleasure和pleased等。 ({%oi h
iv. 混淆可数名词与不可数名词，例如:help, practice 等。 ;8*XOC;[
v. 冠词、情态动词、介词、代词等方面的错误，例如：a English book, should did, must done等。 7m:|u*ij2~
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