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医学考博英语破题技巧---写作部分

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英语作文的总体评分原则(内容与语言两个方面) <Sot{_"li  
记分标准如下: u>fs yn9c  
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13-15(20-17)分:内容切题,包括题中所列三方面的内容:清楚表达其内涵,文字连贯;句式有变化,句子结构和用词正确。文章长度符合要求。 ZK4V-?/[6  
  10-12(16-13)分:内容切题,包括题中所列三方面的内容;比较清楚地表达其内涵;文字基本连贯;句式有一定变化,句子结构和用词无重大错误。文章长度符合要求。 ivo3 pibk%  
  7-9(12-9)分:内容切题,基本包括题中所列三方面的内容:基本清楚地表达其内涵;句子结构和用词有少量错误。文章长度符合要求。 B7Ket8<J  
  4-6(8-5)分:内容基本功题,基本包含题中所列三方面的内容;语句可以理解,但有较多的句子结构和词错误。文章长度基本符合要求。 5Sl"1HL  
  1-3( 4-1)分:基本按要求写作,但只有少数句子可理解。 =p|IWn{P  
  0分:文不切题,语句混乱、无法理解。 gj;gl ="3  
因此,一篇好的作文应基本达到: #X] *kxQ <  
  1) 有较好的写作基础,文章流畅,遣词造句不当,文章结构完整,内容符合要求; .XgY&5Qk  
  2) 语法基本正确; -#%M,Qb  
  3) 句法基本准确,句子与句子段落之间过渡连贯; hw"2'{"II  
  4) 有一定词汇量,字数符合要求; b GSj?t9/  
  5) 说理清楚,内容充实。 J_F\cM   
6) 就小作文而言,还要做到格式与语域正确。 #>yOp *  
7) 书写干净整洁。如果书写较差,以致影响交际,分数会降低一个档次。 i~x]!!  
考生出现的问题 "1|g eO|  
不会审题 )pI( <  
用汉语思维,逐字翻译。 ?z&n I#  
用词搭配不当。 4+8)0;<H  
词汇量小,拼写困难。 nZiwR4kM  
句子逻辑关系混乱。 6O?zi|J[:  
Our English class often told stories. uou "s9  
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不会应用关联词转承上下句子和段落。 dr#%~I  
People learn English to use it , Some learn it to study or work abroad . Others learn it to read books and magazines in English or have something to do with English-speaking foreigners.采用适当关联词,改进为:people learn English for practical purposes :some learn it to study or work abroad, while others learn it to read or communicate in English. M_0f{  
语法错误。 T T 3 6Y  
  i. 分不清及物与不及物动词,例如:rise和raise; hear和listen等 &fRz6Hd  
  ii. 被动与主动语态的误用,例如:interesting和interested; speaking和spoken 等; ~ !ei]UP  
  iii. 词类混淆,将动词或形容词误作名词用,将名词和动词误作形容词用等;例如:benefit和beneficial; difficult和difficulty; pleasure和pleased等。 x7B;\D#`i/  
  iv. 混淆可数名词与不可数名词,例如:help, practice 等。 E$_z BD%  
  v. 冠词、情态动词、介词、代词等方面的错误,例如:a English book, should did, must done等。 b1^wK"#  
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It is true that… m{$+  
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In conclusion, … ^>ir&$  
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lately first U+>M@!=  
first of all now &wY$G! P  
presently firstly JttDRNZAU  
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to start with in general IL An2W  
  (2)“承” =z"+)N  
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then third Wj(#!\ 7F  
thirdly truly }/ vW"&h-  
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  (3)“转” v}Ju2}IK  
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anyway at the same time *$vH]>)p  
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in particular in spite of… H TOr  
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nonetheless as a matter of fact $0 olqt:  
(4)“合” :dSda,!z  
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as has been noted as I have said Kp`{-dUf  
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by and large briefly P0n1I7|  
by doing so consequently i7Up AHd/  
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in conclusion in short nF,F#V8l  
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thus to speak frankly &J>e; X  
to sum up to summarize I,{YxY[$7  
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to conclude obviously B.q/}\ ?(  
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用于反驳性和比较性论文 94"+l@K  
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18. It would be reasonable to take the view that …, but it would be foolish to claim that… 2u3Kyn  
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9. Compared with 1997, it fell from 15 to 10 percent. )+_Vx}O:}  
10. The number is 5 times as much as that of 1995. wC1pfXa  
11. It has decreased almost two and half times, compared with… Od!)MQ*,  
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用于解释性和阐述性论说文 m Q2i$ 0u  
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9. I am of the opinion that… 9Yt|Wj  
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22. Somebody believes/argues/holds/insists/thinks that… vu( 5s  
23. It is not simple to give the reason for this complicated phenomenon… bB<S4@jF8z  
24. Different people observes it in different ways. .gO|=E"  
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用于文章的开头 ,!Wo6{'  
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3. Generally speaking… lWRl  
4. It is quite clear than because… k| OM?\  
5. It is often said that … #Us<#"fC  
6. Many people often ask such question:“…?” x-i,v"8  
7. More and more people have come to realize… !/G}vu  
8. There is no doubt that… M6wH$!zRa  
9. Some people believe that… 3I 0pHP5  
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18. Faced with…, quite a few people argue that…, but other people conceive differently. g73 23m1=  
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14. It is high time that we put considerable emphasis on… *CGHp8  
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17. No one can deny the fact that… ,]qc#KDq-1  
18. We may face the undeniable fact that… [$$R>ELYQ  
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