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医学考博英语破题技巧---写作部分

第1页 $=a$z"  
英语作文的总体评分原则(内容与语言两个方面) TTak[e&j3  
记分标准如下: RLX^'g+P  
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13-15(20-17)分:内容切题,包括题中所列三方面的内容:清楚表达其内涵,文字连贯;句式有变化,句子结构和用词正确。文章长度符合要求。 [:'?}p  
  10-12(16-13)分:内容切题,包括题中所列三方面的内容;比较清楚地表达其内涵;文字基本连贯;句式有一定变化,句子结构和用词无重大错误。文章长度符合要求。 ,B>b9,~3a  
  7-9(12-9)分:内容切题,基本包括题中所列三方面的内容:基本清楚地表达其内涵;句子结构和用词有少量错误。文章长度符合要求。 ee[NZz  
  4-6(8-5)分:内容基本功题,基本包含题中所列三方面的内容;语句可以理解,但有较多的句子结构和词错误。文章长度基本符合要求。 RIx6& 7$  
  1-3( 4-1)分:基本按要求写作,但只有少数句子可理解。 ()JDjzQT  
  0分:文不切题,语句混乱、无法理解。 hvZR4|k>  
因此,一篇好的作文应基本达到: mQuaO# I,  
  1) 有较好的写作基础,文章流畅,遣词造句不当,文章结构完整,内容符合要求; X}^gmu<Vla  
  2) 语法基本正确; ;g9:0,xT4  
  3) 句法基本准确,句子与句子段落之间过渡连贯; >7Q7H#~w  
  4) 有一定词汇量,字数符合要求; 6V E5C g  
  5) 说理清楚,内容充实。 >?FCv7qN  
6) 就小作文而言,还要做到格式与语域正确。 P$(}}@  
7) 书写干净整洁。如果书写较差,以致影响交际,分数会降低一个档次。 @ b({QM|  
考生出现的问题 xK'IsMo[  
不会审题 =LA@E&,j  
用汉语思维,逐字翻译。 3&:fS|L~c  
用词搭配不当。 oPZ4}>uV  
词汇量小,拼写困难。 sR nMBW.  
句子逻辑关系混乱。 KK|Jach  
Our English class often told stories. l))IO`s=_  
应改为:We often told stories in our English class. essW,2,rjC  
不会应用关联词转承上下句子和段落。 G"w Q(6J@  
People learn English to use it , Some learn it to study or work abroad . Others learn it to read books and magazines in English or have something to do with English-speaking foreigners.采用适当关联词,改进为:people learn English for practical purposes :some learn it to study or work abroad, while others learn it to read or communicate in English. !%9I%Ak^  
语法错误。 X|G+N(`|(  
  i. 分不清及物与不及物动词,例如:rise和raise; hear和listen等 9B0"GEwrs  
  ii. 被动与主动语态的误用,例如:interesting和interested; speaking和spoken 等; pQ8+T|0x  
  iii. 词类混淆,将动词或形容词误作名词用,将名词和动词误作形容词用等;例如:benefit和beneficial; difficult和difficulty; pleasure和pleased等。 7C^ nk z  
  iv. 混淆可数名词与不可数名词,例如:help, practice 等。 >^N :A  
  v. 冠词、情态动词、介词、代词等方面的错误,例如:a English book, should did, must done等。 PD4E& k  
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用于解释性和阐述性论说文 H.\`(`6  
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